Guide students to learn “details” description

After primary school students enter the advanced stage of study, students’ writing training becomes composition training. How to guide students to write compositions well? After more than ten years of research, I have explored a way to tutor students’ compositions. Among them, the most important one is that the teacher should strengthen the guidance of detailed description in the teaching of guiding composition, so that students can grasp the key points of the article and do exercises. Guide students to observe life scenes and train students’ ability of speaking before writing. There are scenes everywhere in life. Teachers should guide students to observe and experience carefully. In the class, some students actively raised their hands to answer the questions raised by the teacher, which became a rule. Some competed for answers with witty words. After the class, the scenes of students’ activities were more colorful. Some shuttlecock kicking, some students skipping rope, and some students playing card-smashing games, which were very lively. Guide students to carefully observe the specific process of students’ activities, observe students’ movements, and figure out what kind of words are used to express their movements, so as to better show students’ fun; Observe students’ facial expression changes during activities, think about what kind of words are appropriate to describe; Observe and listen to the students’ happy and funny behaviors, and record them in the form of diary. The training and description of life fragments are carried out at ordinary times, so that students can develop the habit of practicing writing. As time goes by, they will improve their writing level and feel relaxed about composition. Naturally, they will be comfortable when writing composition, it’s not that hard. Let the students pay attention to the character’s appearance and movement characteristics, and learn to accurately use words and images to express the character’s characteristics. Everyone in life has their own rich expressions, and each person’s expressions have their own characteristics, so that students can learn to observe carefully and choose appropriate words to describe them in detail, it will vividly describe the personality characteristics of a character. For example, Lu Xun described Xianglin sister-in-law with a very vivid description: I was scared and raised my head quickly, but I saw a convex cheekbone and thin lips, A woman of about 50 years old stood in front of me, with her hands between her legs, without a skirt, with her feet open, just like a compass with thin feet in a drawing instrument. The author uses a figurative sentence of image to properly show the image characteristics of human beings. The personality characteristics of Xianglin sister-in-law were written out with a few words of convex and thin, which left a deep impression on people. Develop the habit of writing Observation diaries. Pay attention to the exchange of exercises, let students exchange and revise, and learn from each other. Students all have self-esteem, and when they see good compositions of the same age, they will also feel envious in their hearts. Some students will also have the psychology of jealousy. Although this is not good, it can also stimulate students’ psychology of progress to some extent and play a positive role in students. Let the students judge the compositions of other students while reading each other’s exercises, and reflect on their own compositions at the same time, so as to cultivate students’ ability to revise their compositions while revising each other. Some people say that the article is never tired of correcting it. There are many examples like this. It is said that Wang Anshi, one of the Eight Masters of Tang and Song dynasties, a famous litterateur in the Northern Song Dynasty of China, was writing verses on the south bank of the spring breeze and Green River. A green word was repeatedly scrutin, blowing, passing, coming and staying until the Green Word is satisfied, so this famous sentence has been handed down to this day. According to records, the long masterpiece “War and Peace” written by Russian literary giant Lev and Tolstoy has been revised seven times. Anna Karenina has been written for five years, and only the beginning part has been revised 20 times. The full text of the prose “Mr. Fujino” written by Mr. Lu Xun, a literary master in our country, is less than four thousand words, but there are more than 160 changes. Read famous books, pay attention to the detailed description of characters, inspire ideas, learn from good methods and comprehend the connotation of the exercises. Thick masterpieces pay great attention to detail description. For example, there are many writing methods worth learning in A Dream of Red Mansions. The author describes places in detail, which are like Grandma Liu choosing wine glasses to drink in detail; And the places briefly described are like newly-built Grand View Garden. In a word, when the teacher guides the students to learn how to describe details and grasp the key points of the composition questions to develop the essay, it will certainly achieve twice the result with half the effort.

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